ALIASES:Zero or Z SPECIES:Half Saiyan half Bio-Android AGE:17 and a half
GENDER:Male STARTING PLANET:Planet Vegeta
APPEARANCE:6"3 slightly tan, slightly long black hair, One black eye and one white eye which i cover with an eye patch. A long scar that goes across my left eye and an X-shaped scar on my arm. Slightly muscular but mostly scrawny BACKGROUND:Crashed on Planet vegeta as an infant and curiously my ship was a saiyan pod.I didn't have a tail until i was about 13 and I liked to isolate myself and meditate to control my strange anger
TECHNIQUES: Palm strike ki blocker, Mind destruction, Afterimage clones
OFFENSIVE/DEFENSIVE TECHNIQUES: Offensive 1:Eclipse energy blast. Offensive 2: Energy blade jab. Defensive 1: Sphere of protection. Defensive 2: Energy armor. Offensive 3: Eclipse energy generator SUPPORT TECHNIQUES: Healing, Energy Transfer, Teleportaion UTILITY TECHNIQUES: Ki sensory, weak-telepathy, Instant Transmission
As for the app itself, it will need a few changes before it can be accepted.
First, be sure to set the title of your application to your character name.
Smaller point, leaving the name as unknown is a little strange. Since his name is technically his alias, you can put that as for his name just so people know what to call your character.
The appearance is ok, just add a tiny bit more since there is no picture to go off of.
The background is going to need a lot more expansion. Things like, how your character was created (if you stick with bio-android) and who he is as a person and how he came to be said person. What events happened in your character's life to get him to where he is now.
Now for the techniques, I'm going to once more direct you to the rules, specifically mechanics for the pre-approved techniques (and combat rules so you can learn how they are used). Most characters only start with three techniques, and gain them as they gain PL (power level). There are also some techniques that you listed that would not be allowed, for example instant transmission, teleportation, healing, energy transfer, mind destruction, things of that nature. These techniques tend to require specific races or just are not allowed due to the mechanics of the site.
I know this may be a lot to take in so if you have any trouble at all feel free to message me or any of the other staff members. We will be happy to help!
Jun 9, 2021 20:55:38 GMT -6
Yorick Sasaki: this site has a successor what in the hail
Mar 22, 2021 14:13:54 GMT -6
Amara: when i was a lad i ate four dozen eggs
Mar 13, 2021 22:12:28 GMT -6
Nashua: Hey, everyone, Dragon Ball Sparking, this site's successor, is now open for applications! Head on over there to join in on the new adventure! dbsparking.freeforums.net/